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Posted 2/25/2016 7:54:51 PM




He watched her break,
then pulled her from the ashes,
her body burned by flames of passion,
the welts upon her skin like lines of courage.
He pulled her inside of His heart and gently
put her back together again,
healed a soul that had shattered. His fingers gently
caressed her face, then Her kissed her...
one of those kisses that seems to last forever,
and breathed her back to life.
Post #1029463
Posted 10/11/2017 2:07:24 PM



whilst the subject matter addresses a lifestyle i'm not into, your write here reaches beyond that: the voice of the poem creates a seductive moment, my reality, erotic despite its subject for me and no doubt of its subject for others. so i'd say 'well-written'
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